Favour.
My life blazed for a moment.Felt silent in the other.
Complained in the past
was brought to thoughts at last.
Covered by this mortal shrine
pure golden sunlight was never this fine.
thought , fought , got.
Cant believe it yet, though ive been asked to accept.
If anyone could only make this feeling go away,
let thoughts yet again escape me,
If i could only make you feel how i feel.
Would you make this feeling go away?
posted by Nida @ 11:24 AM
5 Comments:
by not making it go away
beautifully written .. you ask questions to ur readers .. try to explain what u are going through .. nice poetic form .. but if u want help .. try explaining it in phiolosophical form.
Thanks for those words Nabeel :).
Now that im on holidays, id a bit more active here on blogspot. Your blog is really very creative :).
Actually i dont mean to ask these questions to every body, either some or a particular person :).
well i really relate to the last two lines .. if only we know what the other person is feeling like .. then we might change our attitudes .. if only we know what that heart really feels like or goes thru .. even if we can get a hint of the other's pain .. we might stop giving pain
mortal shrine .. hmmm .. i am thinking what woudl it be to have an immortal shrine .. how powerful would the meaning be of that ... hmm !!
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